[quicwg/base-drafts] 7164e9: First set of Gorry's nits

Martin Thomson <noreply@github.com> Tue, 09 June 2020 22:14 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 7164e9: First set of Gorry's nits
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  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 7164e9b92a46e346e318cb39d1214edd645ac456
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7164e9b92a46e346e318cb39d1214edd645ac456
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2020-06-09 (Tue, 09 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  First set of Gorry's nits

These are mostly mechanical, but there are a few that need some review.

Closes #3720.


  Commit: 782d99d1c129fe85ff475ca9bfcf36eb5e0c4583
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/782d99d1c129fe85ff475ca9bfcf36eb5e0c4583
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2020-06-09 (Tue, 09 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Further editorial refinement

Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>


  Commit: 7606207cec8f3c1f7764b10446bf274c6f695af1
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7606207cec8f3c1f7764b10446bf274c6f695af1
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2020-06-10 (Wed, 10 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Wrap


  Commit: 7c8adfa243255f8d777bbea7a4241dc727badef5
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7c8adfa243255f8d777bbea7a4241dc727badef5
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2020-06-10 (Wed, 10 Jun 2020)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #3742 from quicwg/gorry-nits-1

First set of Gorry's nits


Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/9693a0fd6ef0...7c8adfa24325