Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Ekr editorial 17 3 (#2164)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Thu, 13 December 2018 23:06 UTC

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MikeBishop commented on this pull request.



> @@ -2338,14 +2345,15 @@ of the packet header.  The remainder of the first byte and an arbitrary
 number of random bytes following it are set to unpredictable values.  The last
 16 bytes of the datagram contain a Stateless Reset Token.
 
-A stateless reset will be interpreted by a recipient as a packet with a short
-header.  For the packet to appear as valid, the Random Bits field needs to
-include at least 182 bits of random or unpredictable values (or 24 bytes, less
-the two fixed bits).  This is intended to allow for a destination connection ID
-of the maximum length permitted, with a minimal packet number, and payload.  The
-Stateless Reset Token corresponds to the minimum expansion of the packet
-protection AEAD.  More random bytes might be necessary if the endpoint could
-have negotiated a packet protection scheme with a larger minimum AEAD expansion.
+A stateless reset will be interpreted by a recipient as a packet with
+a short header.  For the packet to appear as valid, the Random Bits
+field needs to include at least 182 bits of data (or 24 bytes, less
+the two fixed bits). This is intended to allow for a destination
+connection ID of the maximum length permitted, with a minimal packet

Our convention is that the term "connection ID" is not capitalized, but the fields named "Connection ID" are.

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