[quicwg/base-drafts] 73350e: Attempt to make the text clearer. Closes #605

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Wed, 21 June 2017 02:41 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 73350e: Attempt to make the text clearer. Closes #605
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  Branch: refs/heads/packet-number-size-reordering-bug
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 73350e11947ea7dabe863a85c55575b1efe628ba
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/73350e11947ea7dabe863a85c55575b1efe628ba
  Author: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>
  Date:   2017-06-21 (Wed, 21 Jun 2017)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Attempt to make the text clearer.  Closes #605