[quicwg/base-drafts] Confusing duplication in TLS Encryption Level Changes (#3816)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Thu, 02 July 2020 18:41 UTC

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The first two sentences of QUIC-TLS, Section 4.1.4 clearly intend to say different things, but I can't figure out the distinction.  Is there a way we could reword them to make them clearer?

> As keys for new encryption levels become available, TLS provides QUIC with those
> keys.  Separately, as keys at a given encryption level become available to TLS,
> TLS indicates to QUIC that reading or writing keys at that encryption level are
> available.

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