[quicwg/base-drafts] Attempt to make the text clearer (#649)
Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Wed, 21 June 2017 02:42 UTC
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Based on @ianswett's text recommendation in #605. Closes #605. You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/649 -- Commit Summary -- * Attempt to make the text clearer. Closes #605 -- File Changes -- M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (5) -- Patch Links -- https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/649.patch https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/649.diff -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/649
- [quicwg/base-drafts] Attempt to make the text cle… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Attempt to make the pack… ianswett
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Attempt to make the pack… Martin Thomson