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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial proposed changes for cc section (#3491)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Tue, 03 March 2020 22:56 UTC

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martinthomson approved this pull request.

A few typos and one tiny regression, but these are good changes.

>  
 ## Recovery Period
 
 A recovery period is entered when loss or ECN-CE marking of a packet is
-detected.  A recovery period ends when a packet sent during the recovery period
-is acknowledged.  This is slightly different from TCP's definition of recovery,
-which ends when the lost packet that started recovery is acknowledged.
+detected in congestion aviodance but after the congestion wiondow and slow

```suggestion
detected in congestion avoidance but after the congestion window and slow
```

>  
 ## Recovery Period
 
 A recovery period is entered when loss or ECN-CE marking of a packet is
-detected.  A recovery period ends when a packet sent during the recovery period
-is acknowledged.  This is slightly different from TCP's definition of recovery,
-which ends when the lost packet that started recovery is acknowledged.
+detected in congestion aviodance but after the congestion wiondow and slow
+start threhold has been adapted.  A recovery period ends when a packet sent

```suggestion
start threshold has been adapted.  A recovery period ends when a packet sent
```

>  
 ## Recovery Period
 
 A recovery period is entered when loss or ECN-CE marking of a packet is
-detected.  A recovery period ends when a packet sent during the recovery period
-is acknowledged.  This is slightly different from TCP's definition of recovery,
-which ends when the lost packet that started recovery is acknowledged.
+detected in congestion aviodance but after the congestion wiondow and slow
+start threhold has been adapted.  A recovery period ends when a packet sent

adapted how?

> @@ -766,17 +768,18 @@ similar to a sender's response on a Retransmission Timeout (RTO) in TCP
 
 ## Pacing {#pacing}
 
-This document does not specify a pacer, but it is RECOMMENDED that a sender pace
+This document does not specify a pacer, but it is RECOMMENDED that a sender paces

```suggestion
This document does not specify a pacer, but it is RECOMMENDED that a sender pace
```

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