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@marten-seemann requested changes on this pull request.



>        space = pn_space
   return time, space
 
+GetPtoTimeAndSpace():
+  duration = smoothed_rtt +
+      max(4 * rttvar, kGranularity) * (2 ^ pto_count)

I believe you're missing a pair of brackets here.

>        space = pn_space
   return time, space
 
+GetPtoTimeAndSpace():
+  duration = smoothed_rtt +
+      max(4 * rttvar, kGranularity) * (2 ^ pto_count)
+  # Arm PTO from now when there are no inflight packets
+  if (no in-flight packets):
+    return (now() + duration), Initial

This breaks the following case: As a client, I need to send a Handshake packet to unblock the server's amplification limit, if the Initial packet number space was already dropped.

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<p><b>@marten-seemann</b> requested changes on this pull request.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3681#discussion_r430846580">draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt;        space = pn_space
   return time, space
 
+GetPtoTimeAndSpace():
+  duration = smoothed_rtt +
+      max(4 * rttvar, kGranularity) * (2 ^ pto_count)
</pre>
<p>I believe you're missing a pair of brackets here.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3681#discussion_r430873809">draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt;        space = pn_space
   return time, space
 
+GetPtoTimeAndSpace():
+  duration = smoothed_rtt +
+      max(4 * rttvar, kGranularity) * (2 ^ pto_count)
+  # Arm PTO from now when there are no inflight packets
+  if (no in-flight packets):
+    return (now() + duration), Initial
</pre>
<p>This breaks the following case: As a client, I need to send a Handshake packet to unblock the server's amplification limit, if the Initial packet number space was already dropped.</p>

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