Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] QPACK [editorial] Misc minor editorial changes. (#2942)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Wed, 31 July 2019 17:17 UTC

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bencebeky commented on this pull request.



> @@ -814,7 +815,7 @@ cause a stream to become blocked, as described in {{state-synchronization}}.
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 {:#fig-size-sync title="Insert Count Increment"}
 
-An encoder that receives an Increment field equal to zero or one that increases

"zero or one" gets the reader's brain in the wrong groove.

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