[quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing text (#3748)
Jana Iyengar <notifications@github.com> Tue, 09 June 2020 22:59 UTC
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N was introduced in #3630 to describe how a sender might pace at a rate that allows it to send a congestion window's worth of data in a period that is shorter than an RTT. This PR clarifies text that goes into unnecessary detail, trying to describe assumptions (the network is spreading the packets out, for example, resulting in an ack clock). -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/3748
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing… Lars Eggert
- [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing tex… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing… Lars Eggert
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing… Lars Eggert
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial work on pacing… Jana Iyengar