[quicwg/version-negotiation] 676058: Tweak the intro
David Schinazi <noreply@github.com> Mon, 26 July 2021 00:07 UTC
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Branch: refs/heads/main Home: https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation Commit: 676058a843848e34c179b3fb0986c35d2089a44c https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/676058a843848e34c179b3fb0986c35d2089a44c Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2021-07-19 (Mon, 19 Jul 2021) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md Log Message: ----------- Tweak the intro The "single round trip" thing isn't really a guarantee given various factors. Setting this up as *additional* round trips is cleaner and more accurate. I adjusted the paragraph structure to match. Commit: 2b79bdcf7d03fef8baef67bfa7706e41b48c1318 https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/2b79bdcf7d03fef8baef67bfa7706e41b48c1318 Author: David Schinazi <DavidSchinazi@users.noreply.github.com> Date: 2021-07-25 (Sun, 25 Jul 2021) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md Log Message: ----------- Merge pull request #50 from martinthomson/tweak-intro Tweak the intro Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/compare/f369534c4c7e...2b79bdcf7d03
- [quicwg/version-negotiation] 676058: Tweak the in… David Schinazi