[quicwg/base-drafts] Invariant nits (#3772)
Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Wed, 17 June 2020 18:21 UTC
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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Invariant nits (#3772)
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My WGLC feedback for -invariants is mostly nits, so I figured I'd go straight to a PR. There's one piece of this that *might* be non-editorial; feel free to kick to an issue if you prefer. In one section, we say that different versions "might" define authentication for VN packets. Later, we say that QUIC versions MUST define such a mechanism. Resolving in favor of the MUST, I've changed the other occurrence to a more definitive statement that QUIC versions do so. You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3772 -- Commit Summary -- * Invariant nits -- File Changes -- M draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md (8) -- Patch Links -- https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3772.patch https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3772.diff -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3772
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