Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] QPACK [editorial] Misc minor editorial changes. (#2942)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Wed, 23 October 2019 13:02 UTC

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bencebeky commented on this pull request.



> @@ -952,10 +954,8 @@ entry.
 
 ### Indexed Header Field
 
-An indexed header field representation identifies an entry in either the static
-table or the dynamic table and causes that header field to be added to the
-decoded header list, as described in Section 3.2 of [RFC7541].
-<!-- is the 7541 reference still helpful here -->
+An indexed header field instruction identifies an entry in either the static

Created issue #3133 as the "another consistency pass".

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