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Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Out of order relative to other ack-eliciting
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@dtikhonov commented on this pull request.



> @@ -3557,12 +3550,15 @@ which could prevent the connection from ever becoming idle.  Non-ack-eliciting
 packets are eventually acknowledged when the endpoint sends an ACK frame in
 response to other events.
 
-In order to assist loss detection at the sender, an endpoint SHOULD send an ACK
-frame immediately on receiving an ack-eliciting packet that is out of order. The
-endpoint SHOULD NOT continue sending ACK frames immediately unless more
-ack-eliciting packets are received out of order.  If every subsequent
-ack-eliciting packet arrives out of order, then an ACK frame SHOULD be sent
-immediately for every received ack-eliciting packet.
+In order to assist loss detection at the sender, an endpoint SHOULD generate
+and send an ACK frame without delay when it receives an ack-eliciting packet
+either:
+
+* when the received packet has a packet number less than another ack-eliciting
+  packet that has been received, or
+* when the packet has a packet number larger than the highest-numbered
+  ack-eliciting packet that has been received and there are missing packets

This wording strikes me as odd.  A receiver does not know whether there are _missing packets_.  We should simply state that there is a gap in the packet numbers.

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<p><b>@dtikhonov</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4000#discussion_r487135321">draft-ietf-quic-transport.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt; @@ -3557,12 +3550,15 @@ which could prevent the connection from ever becoming idle.  Non-ack-eliciting
 packets are eventually acknowledged when the endpoint sends an ACK frame in
 response to other events.
 
-In order to assist loss detection at the sender, an endpoint SHOULD send an ACK
-frame immediately on receiving an ack-eliciting packet that is out of order. The
-endpoint SHOULD NOT continue sending ACK frames immediately unless more
-ack-eliciting packets are received out of order.  If every subsequent
-ack-eliciting packet arrives out of order, then an ACK frame SHOULD be sent
-immediately for every received ack-eliciting packet.
+In order to assist loss detection at the sender, an endpoint SHOULD generate
+and send an ACK frame without delay when it receives an ack-eliciting packet
+either:
+
+* when the received packet has a packet number less than another ack-eliciting
+  packet that has been received, or
+* when the packet has a packet number larger than the highest-numbered
+  ack-eliciting packet that has been received and there are missing packets
</pre>
<p>This wording strikes me as odd.  A receiver does not know whether there are <em>missing packets</em>.  We should simply state that there is a gap in the packet numbers.</p>

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