[quicwg/base-drafts] a38c07: QPACK [editorial] Misc minor editorial changes. (#...

Bence Béky <noreply@github.com> Mon, 21 October 2019 15:52 UTC

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  Branch: refs/heads/master
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: a38c07a8bf702895f617c71ea912356ed9d00566
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/a38c07a8bf702895f617c71ea912356ed9d00566
  Author: Bence Béky <bencebeky@users.noreply.github.com>
  Date:   2019-10-21 (Mon, 21 Oct 2019)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md

  Log Message:
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  QPACK [editorial] Misc minor editorial changes. (#2942)

* non-controversial one-offs

* Do not unnecessarily change "avoid" to "choose not".

* Do not unnecessarily remove "without resending..." phrase.

* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-Authored-By: Mike Bishop <mbishop@evequefou.be>

* MikeBishop's wording suggestion for allowing creation of an encoder stream and a decoder stream.

* indexed header field representation

* eviction when adding a new entry

* Add word inclusive.