Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS presentation language with QUIC encoding (#3108)
Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Tue, 22 October 2019 00:40 UTC
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martinthomson approved this pull request. SGTM > @@ -1336,7 +1336,7 @@ protocol incompatible with the protocol version being used. ## QUIC Transport Parameters Extension {#quic_parameters} QUIC transport parameters are carried in a TLS extension. Different versions of -QUIC might define a different format for this struct. +QUIC might define a different format for them. "them" is a little vague. ```suggestion QUIC might define a different method for negotiating transport configuration. ``` > +| Transport Parameter ID (16) | ++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ +| Transport Param Length (16) | This should be a multi-line suggestion, but thanks to GitHub, it doesn't work that way... ```suggestion | Transport Parameter ID (16) | Transport Param Length (16) | ``` > ~~~ - struct { - opaque ipv4Address[4]; - uint16 ipv4Port; - opaque ipv6Address[16]; - uint16 ipv6Port; - opaque connectionId<0..20>; - opaque statelessResetToken[16]; - } PreferredAddress; + 0 1 2 3 + 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 ++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ +| IPv4 Address (32) | ++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ +| IPv4 Port (16) | ++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ You could wrap this differently... ``` +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ | IPv4 Port (16) | | +-------------------------------+ + | | + + | IPv6 Address (128) | + + | | + +-------------------------------+ | | IPv6 Port (16) | +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ ``` > +| CID Length (8)| ++-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ +| Connection ID (*) ... ```suggestion | CID Length (8)| Connection ID (*) ... ``` -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3108#pullrequestreview-304921499
- [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS prese… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… MikkelFJ
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Nick Banks
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… ianswett
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Rui Paulo
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Rui Paulo
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… David Schinazi
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Marten Seemann
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Kazuho Oku
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Replace use of the TLS p… Martin Thomson