[quicwg/base-drafts] 9719e0: Second set of editorial nits
Martin Thomson <noreply@github.com> Fri, 19 June 2020 04:00 UTC
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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 9719e0: Second set of editorial nits
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Branch: refs/heads/master Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: 9719e067e90469dad09c0bf3d6e86bc1e10c37cb https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/9719e067e90469dad09c0bf3d6e86bc1e10c37cb Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-06-17 (Wed, 17 Jun 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Second set of editorial nits @gorryfair had some useful feedback in #3735. This doesn't address the following items as numbered in the issue: (2) Because the fix to (1) seems adequate by my reckoning. That addresses the question of considering the impact on other network users. (6) This doesn't appear to be a problem. It might be a formatting issue, with the URL not appearing. (7) This is addressed in the recent draft by adding [Section 10.2.2](https://quicwg.org/base-drafts/draft-ietf-quic-transport.html#name-deferring-idle-timeout) (9) and (11) I can't find the rendering glitch mentioned. The rest of these are good. Closes #3735. Commit: 8f453ff92b9ba3439c654c5b2681c3ddc7d5a399 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8f453ff92b9ba3439c654c5b2681c3ddc7d5a399 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-06-18 (Thu, 18 Jun 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Capacity Commit: 1ec60fab50a84aa0f50c68fce3de8e700587d038 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/1ec60fab50a84aa0f50c68fce3de8e700587d038 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-06-19 (Fri, 19 Jun 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- These need wrapping :| Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com> Commit: 5270a60a884891607a2d8012bcd7bc6ee4f5f3c4 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/5270a60a884891607a2d8012bcd7bc6ee4f5f3c4 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-06-19 (Fri, 19 Jun 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Wrap Commit: 72b0f3722299aec92f18dea121f8d960ccd19682 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/72b0f3722299aec92f18dea121f8d960ccd19682 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-06-19 (Fri, 19 Jun 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Merge pull request #3770 from quicwg/gorry-nits-2 Second set of editorial nits Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/10fccc87bb52...72b0f3722299
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