[quicwg/base-drafts] QPACK Auth48 edits (PR #4982)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Mon, 04 April 2022 21:28 UTC

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This PR contains, as best I can, the content and XML changes made by the RFC Editor during Auth48, including those I disagree with.  I&#39;ll note and propose reversions where appropriate.

Things not addressed:

- In Section 1.2, the RFC Editor added `indent=9` to the `&lt;dl&gt;` tag; I&#39;m not sure how to do that from Markdown
- The change in #4980 was pulled out into a separate issue.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4982

-- Commit Summary --

  * Differences in text output
  * More edits, particularly regarding XML
  * Acknowledgements in RFC9000 style

-- File Changes --

    M rfc9114.md (2)
    R rfc9204.md (286)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4982.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4982.diff

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