[quicwg/base-drafts] f29928: Tweak language more

Martin Thomson <noreply@github.com> Mon, 15 July 2019 00:00 UTC

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  Branch: refs/heads/issue2890
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: f2992808f37445b69db10f7921b34562682fb5a0
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f2992808f37445b69db10f7921b34562682fb5a0
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2019-07-15 (Mon, 15 Jul 2019)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Tweak language more