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janaiyengar approved this pull request.



> @@ -710,14 +722,19 @@ based on the client's initial Destination Connection ID, as described in
 {{initial-secrets}}.
 
 The keys used for packet protection are computed from the TLS secrets using the
-method described in Section 7.3 of {{!TLS13}}), with the labels "quic key" and
-"quic iv" in place of the labels used by TLS (that is, "key" and "iv"
-respectively).  Using these labels provides key separation between QUIC and TLS,
-see {{key-diversity}}.
+KDF provided by TLS.  In TLS 1.3, the HKDF-Expand-Label function described in
+Section 7.1 of {{!TLS13}}) is used, using the hash function from the negotiated
+cipher suite.  Other versions of TLS MUST provide a similar function in order to
+be used QUIC.
+
+ The current encryption level secret and the label "quic key" are input to the

```suggestion
The current encryption level secret and the label "quic key" are input to the
```

> @@ -753,9 +770,8 @@ thus ensuring that the keys are different for each version of QUIC. This
 prevents a middlebox that only recognizes one version of QUIC from seeing or
 modifying the contents of handshake packets from future versions.
 
-The HKDF function defined in TLS 1.3 MUST be used even in case the minimum TLS
-version that the endpoint is willing to use is greater, so as to assure that
-the peer can decrypt the packet.
+The HKDF-Expand-Label function defined in TLS 1.3 MUST be used for Initial

Might be worth stating "For QUICv1 ..."

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<p><b>@janaiyengar</b> approved this pull request.</p>

<hr>

<p>In <a href=3D"https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2046#discussi=
on_r236507198">draft-ietf-quic-tls.md</a>:</p>
<pre style=3D'color:#555'>&gt; @@ -710,14 +722,19 @@ based on the client&=
#39;s initial Destination Connection ID, as described in
 {{initial-secrets}}.
 =

 The keys used for packet protection are computed from the TLS secrets us=
ing the
-method described in Section 7.3 of {{!TLS13}}), with the labels &quot;qu=
ic key&quot; and
-&quot;quic iv&quot; in place of the labels used by TLS (that is, &quot;k=
ey&quot; and &quot;iv&quot;
-respectively).  Using these labels provides key separation between QUIC =
and TLS,
-see {{key-diversity}}.
+KDF provided by TLS.  In TLS 1.3, the HKDF-Expand-Label function describ=
ed in
+Section 7.1 of {{!TLS13}}) is used, using the hash function from the neg=
otiated
+cipher suite.  Other versions of TLS MUST provide a similar function in =
order to
+be used QUIC.
+
+ The current encryption level secret and the label &quot;quic key&quot; =
are input to the
</pre>
=E2=AC=87=EF=B8=8F Suggested change
<pre style=3D"color: #555">- The current encryption level secret and the =
label "quic key" are input to the
+The current encryption level secret and the label "quic key" are input t=
o the
</pre>


<hr>

<p>In <a href=3D"https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2046#discussi=
on_r236507416">draft-ietf-quic-tls.md</a>:</p>
<pre style=3D'color:#555'>&gt; @@ -753,9 +770,8 @@ thus ensuring that the=
 keys are different for each version of QUIC. This
 prevents a middlebox that only recognizes one version of QUIC from seein=
g or
 modifying the contents of handshake packets from future versions.
 =

-The HKDF function defined in TLS 1.3 MUST be used even in case the minim=
um TLS
-version that the endpoint is willing to use is greater, so as to assure =
that
-the peer can decrypt the packet.
+The HKDF-Expand-Label function defined in TLS 1.3 MUST be used for Initi=
al
</pre>
<p>Might be worth stating "For QUICv1 ..."</p>

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