[quicwg/base-drafts] d513b0: Reword some with explanations

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Tue, 23 October 2018 23:47 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] d513b0: Reword some with explanations
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  Branch: refs/heads/how-to-protect-close
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: d513b05d9f3efb1442fae4e9ab0476fc9cdeaec7
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/d513b05d9f3efb1442fae4e9ab0476fc9cdeaec7
  Author: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>
  Date:   2018-10-24 (Wed, 24 Oct 2018)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Reword some with explanations



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