[quicwg/base-drafts] 4cdea4: Make language of representations consistent.
afrind <noreply@github.com> Tue, 29 October 2019 21:17 UTC
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Branch: refs/heads/master Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: 4cdea4668edcba12859a11cbb0b3ccfbdf61016a https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/4cdea4668edcba12859a11cbb0b3ccfbdf61016a Author: Bence Béky <bnc@google.com> Date: 2019-10-29 (Tue, 29 Oct 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- Make language of representations consistent. This was inspired by the comment by afrind at https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2942#discussion_r335222617. For each representation, uniformly * use the word "representation" in the first sentence; * use the word "identifies" if it's a verbatim entry; "encodes" otherwise; * identify relative versus post-base indexing in the first sentence; * move drawing right after first sentence; * use consistent language describing binary format.