[quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (#3667)
Jana Iyengar <notifications@github.com> Tue, 19 May 2020 00:55 UTC
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N was introduced in #3630 to describe how a sender might pace at a rate that allows it to send a congestion window's worth of data in a period that is shorter than an RTT. This PR clarifies text that goes into unnecessary detail, trying to describe assumptions (the network is spreading the packets out, for example, resulting in an ack clock). You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3667 -- Commit Summary -- * Trim text on pacing * tweak language instead of removing -- File Changes -- M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md (10) -- Patch Links -- https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3667.patch https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3667.diff -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3667
- [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (#366… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… ianswett
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify text on pacing (… ianswett