Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial suggestions from Benjamin Kaduk's IESG review (qpack) (#4789)

[Martin Thomson <[e-mail]>]

@martinthomson approved this pull request.



> @@ -1203,9 +1204,9 @@ the dynamic table state. If a guess is compressed into a shorter length, the
 attacker can observe the encoded length and infer that the guess was correct.
 
 This is possible even over the Transport Layer Security Protocol (TLS, see
-{{?TLS=RFC8446}}), because while TLS provides confidentiality protection for
-content, it only provides a limited amount of protection for the length of that
-content.
+{{?TLS=RFC8446}}) and QUIC Transport Protocol (see {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}), because
+while TLS and QUIC provide confidentiality protection for content, they only
+provides a limited amount of protection for the length of that content.

```suggestion
provide a limited amount of protection for the length of that content.
```

> @@ -1339,7 +1341,7 @@ An attacker can try to cause an endpoint to exhaust its memory. QPACK is
 designed to limit both the peak and stable amounts of memory allocated by an
 endpoint.
 
-The amount of memory used by the encoder is limited by the protocol using
+The amount of memory used by the decoder is limited by the protocol using

👍 

> @@ -1717,7 +1719,7 @@ Stream: Decoder
                                3   0  custom-key  custom-value
                               ^-- acknowledged --^
                                4   0  :authority  www.example.com
-                              Size=215
+                              Size=217

I didn't catch this when @afrind updated examples at my request.  Thanks.

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