Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial nits (#3770)

Jana Iyengar <notifications@github.com> Thu, 18 June 2020 22:08 UTC

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@janaiyengar approved this pull request.

Let's get these in and deal with more specific issues separately.

> @@ -3463,9 +3464,10 @@ the IP header SHOULD be acknowledged immediately, to reduce the peer's response
 time to congestion events.
 
 The algorithms in {{QUIC-RECOVERY}} are expected to be resilient to receivers
-that do not follow guidance offered above. However, an implementer should only
+that do not follow guidance offered above. However, an endpoint should only

```suggestion
that do not follow guidance offered above. However, an implementation should only
```

>  necessary if an ACK frame would be too large to fit in a packet, however
 receivers MAY also limit ACK frame size further to preserve space for other

```suggestion
necessary if an ACK frame would be too large to fit in a packet.
Receivers MAY also limit ACK frame size further to preserve space for other
```

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[quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial nits… Martin Thomson
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Gorry Fairhurst
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Gorry Fairhurst
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Martin Thomson
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Martin Thomson
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Jana Iyengar
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Martin Thomson
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Martin Thomson
Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Second set of editorial … Martin Thomson