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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify loss epoch (#3213)

Marten Seemann <notifications@github.com> Mon, 11 November 2019 01:50 UTC

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marten-seemann commented on this pull request.



> @@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ not available.
 
 ### Clearer Loss Epoch
 
-QUIC ends a loss epoch when a packet sent after loss is declared is
+A loss epoch ends when a packet sent after loss is first declared is

I don't understand this sentence. There are too many "is".

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