Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] First tranche of EKR's editorial pass, through 7.3.2 (#2087)
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martinthomson approved this pull request.
> operating systems and middleboxes. QUIC authenticates all of its headers and
-encrypts most of the data it exchanges, including its signaling, to avoid
+encrypts most of the data it exchanges -- including its signaling -- to avoid
I hate em--dashes done this way.
> @@ -383,7 +383,7 @@ data to a peer.
~~~
o
| Create Stream (Sending)
- | Create Bidirectional Stream (Receiving)
+ | Remote Creates Bidirectional Stream
s/Remote/peer
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- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] First tranche of EKR's e… Martin Thomson
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- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] First tranche of EKR's e… janaiyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] First tranche of EKR's e… Martin Thomson
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