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Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Remove "bundle" terminology (#3740)
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@marten-seemann commented on this pull request.

tbh, I think the text reads a lot better with bundling.

> @@ -3354,8 +3354,8 @@ One of the benefits of QUIC is avoidance of head-of-line blocking across
 multiple streams.  When a packet loss occurs, only streams with data in that
 packet are blocked waiting for a retransmission to be received, while other
 streams can continue making progress.  Note that when data from multiple streams
-is bundled into a single QUIC packet, loss of that packet blocks all those
-streams from making progress.  Implementations are advised to bundle as few
+are included in a single QUIC packet, loss of that packet blocks all those

s/are/is?

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<p><b>@marten-seemann</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

<p>tbh, I think the text reads a lot better with bundling.</p><hr>

<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3740#discussion_r437127758">draft-ietf-quic-transport.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt; @@ -3354,8 +3354,8 @@ One of the benefits of QUIC is avoidance of head-of-line blocking across
 multiple streams.  When a packet loss occurs, only streams with data in that
 packet are blocked waiting for a retransmission to be received, while other
 streams can continue making progress.  Note that when data from multiple streams
-is bundled into a single QUIC packet, loss of that packet blocks all those
-streams from making progress.  Implementations are advised to bundle as few
+are included in a single QUIC packet, loss of that packet blocks all those
</pre>
<p>s/are/is?</p>

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