[quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92)
Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Mon, 19 December 2016 04:12 UTC
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Date: Sun, 18 Dec 2016 20:12:29 -0800
From: Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com>
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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92)
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The abstract was just a repetition of the introduction, which isn't really appropriate. An abstract doesn't need rationale and all the padding, it should just explain the purpose of the document. QUIC is conceptually very simple, let's capitalize on that. I wanted to fix the first sentence of the intro to avoid duplication, but it really is a concise, well-constructed intro. It could benefit from being split into smaller pieces though. You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92 -- Commit Summary -- * Shorten the abstract * Small digestible chunks -- File Changes -- M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (31) -- Patch Links -- https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92.patch https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92.diff -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/92
- [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) ianswett
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) janaiyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) Martin Thomson
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) Sean Turner
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) ianswett
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) janaiyengar
- Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Short abstract (#92) janaiyengar