Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Clarify OnAckReceived pseudocode (#2140)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Thu, 13 December 2018 07:02 UTC

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martinthomson requested changes on this pull request.



> @@ -720,9 +720,14 @@ Pseudocode for OnAckReceived and UpdateRtt follow:
     // ack-eliciting, update the RTT.
     if (sent_packets[ack.largest_acked] &&
         sent_packets[ack.largest_acked].ack_eliciting):
+      largest_acked_packet = ack.largest_acked

This doesn't work because the largest_acked in the ACK might be newly acknowledged, but not the largest ever acknowledged.

```suggestion
      if ack.largest_acked > largest_acked_packet:
         largest_acked_packet = ack.largest_acked
```

>        latest_rtt = now - sent_packets[ack.largest_acked].time
       UpdateRtt(latest_rtt, ack.ack_delay)
 
+    // Process ECN information if present.
+    if (ACK frame contains ECN information):
+       ProcessECN(ack)

This is a separate change.  I think that you should make this a separate PR.

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