[quicwg/base-drafts] Misc. small fixes (#189)

Alessandro Ghedini <notifications@github.com> Sat, 21 January 2017 21:40 UTC

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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/189

-- Commit Summary --

  * Frame type is already defined, don't repeat
  * Don't repeat how StreamID len is determined (other fields don't)
  * Fix a bunch of typos
  * Use "a RST_STREAM ..." for consistency
  * Fix grammer by adding some words
  * Don't repeat subject
  * Fix more typos
  * Somehow this sentence sounds weird, improve wording
  * Saying "cumulative" once is enough I reckon
  * Fix pseudo-code indentation

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md (6)
    M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md (11)
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md (26)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/189.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/189.diff

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