[quicwg/version-negotiation] 614b6b: I think this is clearer because the server doesn't...

Eric Rescorla <noreply@github.com> Thu, 27 April 2023 22:42 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/version-negotiation] 614b6b: I think this is clearer because the server doesn't...
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  Branch: refs/heads/ekr_editorial_auth48
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation
  Commit: 614b6b43ecaad307047a474df2b3a24b4737be10
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/614b6b43ecaad307047a474df2b3a24b4737be10
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-04-27 (Thu, 27 Apr 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
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  I think this is clearer because the server doesn't know at
this point that it's the Original Version.


  Commit: b5ec41d89af8e458cd7db41cb90974c83f4cdc4e
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/b5ec41d89af8e458cd7db41cb90974c83f4cdc4e
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-04-27 (Thu, 27 Apr 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  I think these should be normative


  Commit: cb9063353a5bcdb9f711e171ae288844940b75e0
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/cb9063353a5bcdb9f711e171ae288844940b75e0
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-04-27 (Thu, 27 Apr 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  The next sentence has a SHOULD so I think this one should.


  Commit: 829f531d9222c0cb90119d42fdcdb561cb4a1387
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/829f531d9222c0cb90119d42fdcdb561cb4a1387
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-04-27 (Thu, 27 Apr 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  Restructure the text about comparing the "outer" version
and Chosen Version to talk generally and then about
QUIC v1


  Commit: eff954f6fb18aa04aecf2e207540ca787ed2d1a9
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/eff954f6fb18aa04aecf2e207540ca787ed2d1a9
  Author: EKR <ekr@rtfm.com>
  Date:   2023-04-27 (Thu, 27 Apr 2023)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
  -----------
  Restructure the rules about missing VI.

I think maybe we should have this be a SHOULD that you complete
even if VI is missing?


Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/compare/614b6b43ecaa%5E...eff954f6fb18