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ianswett commented on this pull request.



> @@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ Pseudocode for SetLossDetectionTimer follows:
  SetLossDetectionTimer():
     // Don't arm timer if there are no ack-eliciting packets
     // in flight.
-    if (bytes_in_flight == 0):
+    if (no ack-eliciting packets oustanding):

We never define what outstanding means, from what I can find, though we do use in a few spots.  In this case, I believe it should be "no ack-eliciting packets In-flight"?

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<p><b>@ianswett</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2117#discussion_r240862793">draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt; @@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ Pseudocode for SetLossDetectionTimer follows:
  SetLossDetectionTimer():
     // Don&#39;t arm timer if there are no ack-eliciting packets
     // in flight.
-    if (bytes_in_flight == 0):
+    if (no ack-eliciting packets oustanding):
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<p>We never define what outstanding means, from what I can find, though we do use in a few spots.  In this case, I believe it should be "no ack-eliciting packets In-flight"?</p>

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