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janaiyengar approved this pull request.

One nit, but LGTM.

> @@ -190,6 +190,11 @@ QUIC packet:
 : A complete processable unit of QUIC that can be encapsulated in a UDP
   datagram.  Multiple QUIC packets can be encapsulated in a single UDP datagram.
 
+Ack-eliciting Packet:
+
+: A QUIC packet that contains frames other than ACK and PADDING. These cause a
+  recipient to send an acknowledgment within the maximum ack delay.

```suggestion
  recipient to send an acknowledgment within its maximum ACK delay ({{transport-parameter-definitions}}).
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