[quicwg/base-drafts] editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me (recovery) (#3383)

mirjak <notifications@github.com> Wed, 22 January 2020 16:39 UTC

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So here is an alternative proposal. However I also wonder why this paragraph is a MUST requirement while the previous statement (avoiding multiple samples of the same packet) is only a SHOULD? I would see it rather the other way around or both MUSTs.
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  * editorial: This sentence was hard to parse for me (recovery)

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    M draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md (7)

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