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Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Unifying words in recovery draft (#3893)
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@martinthomson commented on this pull request.



> @@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ or when Initial or Handshake keys are discarded. This ensures the PTO is always
 set based on the latest RTT information and for the last sent packet in the
 correct packet number space.
 
-When ack-eliciting packets in multiple packet number spaces are in flight,
+When ack-eliciting packets in multiple packet number spaces are in-flight,

This is a quirk in English.  The hyphen is only used when "in-flight" is a modifier for some other term, like "in-flight packets".  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_compound#Hyphenated_compound_modifiers

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<p><b>@martinthomson</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

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<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3893#discussion_r453417239">draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt; @@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ or when Initial or Handshake keys are discarded. This ensures the PTO is always
 set based on the latest RTT information and for the last sent packet in the
 correct packet number space.
 
-When ack-eliciting packets in multiple packet number spaces are in flight,
+When ack-eliciting packets in multiple packet number spaces are in-flight,
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<p>This is a quirk in English.  The hyphen is only used when "in-flight" is a modifier for some other term, like "in-flight packets".  <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_compound#Hyphenated_compound_modifiers" rel="nofollow">https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_compound#Hyphenated_compound_modifiers</a></p>

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