Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Praveen's WGLC comments (editorial) (#3928)

Jana Iyengar <notifications@github.com> Tue, 21 July 2020 23:18 UTC

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@janaiyengar commented on this pull request.



> @@ -867,7 +867,9 @@ between the oldest and newest lost packets: (3 - 0) = 3.  The duration for
 persistent congestion is equal to: (1 * kPersistentCongestionThreshold) = 3.
 Because the threshold was reached and because none of the packets between the
 oldest and the newest packets are acknowledged, the network is considered to
-have experienced persistent congestion.
+have experienced persistent congestion. Note that this example shows the
+occurrence of PTOs, but that is not required for persistent congestion to be
+established.

Yup, I'll prefer that text when merging.

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