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ianswett commented on this pull request.

Thanks, I'm going to remove that paragraph.

> @@ -1336,11 +1335,7 @@ and sets the SCIL field to indicate the length.
 The first flight of 0-RTT packets use the same Destination and Source Connection
 ID values as the client's first Initial.
 
-The Destination Connection ID field in the server's Initial packet contains a
-connection ID that is chosen by the recipient of the packet (i.e., the client);
-the Source Connection ID includes the connection ID that the sender of the
-packet wishes to use (see {{connection-id}}). The server MUST use consistent
-Source Connection IDs during the handshake.
+The server MUST use consistent Source Connection IDs during the handshake.

Weirdly, this text was already there, see lines 1342/1343.

But I agree, this is clearly incorrect or depends upon the definition of consistent, which I don't believe is worth defining.  I'm going to remove this paragraph.

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<p><b>@ianswett</b> commented on this pull request.</p>

<p>Thanks, I'm going to remove that paragraph.</p><hr>

<p>In <a href="https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2731#discussion_r295081951">draft-ietf-quic-transport.md</a>:</p>
<pre style='color:#555'>&gt; @@ -1336,11 +1335,7 @@ and sets the SCIL field to indicate the length.
 The first flight of 0-RTT packets use the same Destination and Source Connection
 ID values as the client&#39;s first Initial.
 
-The Destination Connection ID field in the server&#39;s Initial packet contains a
-connection ID that is chosen by the recipient of the packet (i.e., the client);
-the Source Connection ID includes the connection ID that the sender of the
-packet wishes to use (see {{connection-id}}). The server MUST use consistent
-Source Connection IDs during the handshake.
+The server MUST use consistent Source Connection IDs during the handshake.
</pre>
<p>Weirdly, this text was already there, see lines 1342/1343.</p>
<p>But I agree, this is clearly incorrect or depends upon the definition of consistent, which I don't believe is worth defining.  I'm going to remove this paragraph.</p>

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