[quicwg/base-drafts] RFC Editor Copyedits (PR #4956)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Tue, 15 February 2022 20:35 UTC

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This PR contains (most?) of the changes to the HTTP/3 spec the RFC editor made directly.  There are a few I&#39;ve chosen not to incorporate here.  I will note them on the PR when they affect a particular line; general ones are:

- Combined references to sections; I don&#39;t see a way to do that in Markdown, but #4955 tracks this.
- The `&lt;sup&gt;` tag produces parentheses in the .txt version for me, but apparently not for the RFC Editor.  However, the XML still contains the correct output, so I&#39;m not currently planning to make changes.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4956

-- Commit Summary --

  * Most of the RFC Editor edits
  * Missed a few
  * HTTP/3 is RFC9114

-- File Changes --

    R rfc9114.md (346)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4956.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4956.diff

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