Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Add initial threat model appendix (#2925)

Eric Kinnear <notifications@github.com> Tue, 03 September 2019 23:46 UTC

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erickinnear commented on this pull request.



> @@ -5753,13 +5753,184 @@ DecodePacketNumber(largest_pn, truncated_pn, pn_nbits):
    return candidate_pn
 ~~~
 
+# Overview of Security Properties {#security-properties}
+
+A complete security analysis of QUIC is outside the scope of this document.  In
+this appendix, we provide an informal description of the desired security
+properties as an aid to implementors and to help guide protocol analysis.
+
+We cover properties of the handshake, general transport, and migration
+separately.

Removed all of the "we" from this diff, great suggestions as well, thanks!

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