Re: : Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts

Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com> Thu, 13 May 2021 08:39 UTC

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From: Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
To: Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>, QUIC WG <quic@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: : Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts
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Thanks for the review! We will try to make a pass next week!


From: QUIC <quic-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
Date: Wednesday, 12. May 2021 at 17:12
To: QUIC WG <quic@ietf.org>
Subject: : Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts


I reviewed manageability, and think this is mostly ready - with a few issues, to which I added:
Manageability: PMTU<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e2a8274e-bd331e7f-e2a867d5-86e2237f51fb-3b74e0b770f17799&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F366>
#365 ( with suggestions)
Manageability: Is dropping intended to be random?<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=9c6a3c69-c3f10558-9c6a7cf2-86e2237f51fb-1115ab3b8e91d485&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F365>
#365 ( with suggestions)
Manageability: does the endpoint change address using a NAPT?<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=f1b8ca47-ae23f376-f1b88adc-86e2237f51fb-2ccd88f2c78c5f46&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F364>
#364   ( with suggestions)
Manageability: Not so trivial ACK detection for TCP<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=5e2bece7-01b0d5d6-5e2bac7c-86e2237f51fb-f0aed0dc60ac1036&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F363>
#363  ( with suggestions)
Manageability: Detailed Review Comments - NiTs<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=7e44b87a-21df814b-7e44f8e1-86e2237f51fb-caa8768de50af553&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F362>

#362 (mostly with suggestions)



The issues I raised in the first review appear now to have been resolved, many thanks,

Gorry

On Thu, May 6, 2021, at 16:37, Martin Thomson wrote:

I just read through applicability and it's good.  I found a few errors,

but nothing truly shocking.  The editorial standard is pretty high.

I've submitted pull requests for those things I found.



Starting on the other now.



On Tue, Apr 27, 2021, at 04:09, Matt Joras wrote:

Hello,



The Ops drafts have already gone through one round of last call, where

there was good feedback and engagement driving further changes. Since

then we have new revisions to the drafts. It is the opinion of the

editors and chairs that these are ready for another last call. Thus

this email announces another Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for the

following documents:



* Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol

  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-manageability-11

* Applicability of the QUIC Transport Protocol

  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-applicability-11



The WGLC will run for two weeks, ending on 10 May 2021.



Please review the documents above and open issues for your review

comments in our repository at https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=845f1e05-dbc42734-845f5e9e-86e2237f51fb-c442fbf02bb2f6e5&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts>.

You may also send comments to quic@ietf.org<mailto:quic@ietf.org>.



Thanks,



Lars, Lucas, Matt

QUIC WG Chairs