AD review of draft-ietf-quic-tls-31
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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
To: "quic@ietf.org" <quic@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-quic-tls@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-quic-tls@ietf.org>
Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-quic-tls-31
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Date: Wed, 14 Oct 2020 08:31:37 +0000
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Hi, I have now finished my AD review of draft-ietf-quic-tls-31 I have filed the below github issues that are my review. https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4197 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4198 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4199 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4204 The document is in good shape just these few minor improvements to avoid some risk of mistakes. There is an existing issue on TLS-31 that in my opinion do need to be resolved prior to IETF last call. The reason for me taking that stance is that the IETF wide community and especially people with crypto competence should have a chance to review the changes now introduced. https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/3701 So I will put this document in Revised ID needed. Cheers Magnus Westerlund
- AD review of draft-ietf-quic-tls-31 Magnus Westerlund