Re: Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts

Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Thu, 06 May 2021 06:37 UTC

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Date: Thu, 06 May 2021 16:37:01 +1000
From: "Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts
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I just read through applicability and it's good.  I found a few errors, but nothing truly shocking.  The editorial standard is pretty high.  I've submitted pull requests for those things I found.

Starting on the other now.

On Tue, Apr 27, 2021, at 04:09, Matt Joras wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> The Ops drafts have already gone through one round of last call, where
> there was good feedback and engagement driving further changes. Since
> then we have new revisions to the drafts. It is the opinion of the
> editors and chairs that these are ready for another last call. Thus
> this email announces another Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for the
> following documents:
> 
> * Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
>   https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-manageability-11
> * Applicability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
>   https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-applicability-11
> 
> The WGLC will run for two weeks, ending on 10 May 2021.
> 
> Please review the documents above and open issues for your review
> comments in our repository at https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts.
> You may also send comments to quic@ietf.org.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Lars, Lucas, Matt
> QUIC WG Chairs
> 
>