Re: Proposed Charter Text

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

On Mon, 2020-01-27 at 16:36 +0000, Mike Bishop wrote:
> This is true, but has also been a useful guide to our work on HTTP/3.  As you
> note, “HTTP/2 semantics” isn’t really a thing – HTTP/2 is a mapping of HTTP
> semantics over TCP – but we’ve interpreted this as saying that HTTP/3 by
> default has the same feature set as HTTP/2.  We’ve required consensus in both
> QUIC and HTTP working groups to deviate from that (e.g. priorities). 
> Clarifying that language wouldn’t be inappropriate, but also isn’t closely
> bound to the point of this update.

I agree that the HTTP/2 looks a bit strange. However, I think I will leave it in
place as there quite a bit to reword. Lets deal this in the next recharter when
maybe some of this text may not even be needed. 

>  
> Depends how much we want to fix existing text, just like any other PR, I
> suppose.  😊
>  
> Other feedback:
> Formatting nit:  Your “key goals” bullet points are folded into a single
> mishmash paragraph

In the editing view in the datatracker they are nice individual lines. So I
think it is some output reflowing that occurs. Will attempt to add some white
spaces to see if it looks better. 

> With the removal of the mention of the initial documents, do we need the
> discussion about how we decide what to keep/change from those initial
> documents?

So when initially chartered it was an indication of the starting point. However,
three years down the line I would think all decision has been made about what to
keep and not from the input. And any change to the drafts today should not be
based on the argument, this was part of the individual drafts and therefore
should be added/changed. 

Cheers

Magnus


>  
> From: QUIC <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Ian Swett
> Sent: Monday, January 27, 2020 9:25 AM
> To: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund=[e-mail]>
> Cc: [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: Proposed Charter Text
>  
> Thanks for the update.  The original charter mentions HTTP/2 multiple times,
> but except for when it's in reference to extensions, I think it would be
> preferable to use HTTP instead of HTTP/2.  For example, "The first mapping
> will be a
> description of HTTP/2 semantics using QUIC," and  "especially on the QUIC
> mapping for HTTP/2" are quite odd now that HTTP/3 is it's own thing which
> shares very little with HTTP/2.
>  
> And two small comments below.
>  
> Ian
>  
> On Mon, Jan 27, 2020 at 9:07 AM Magnus Westerlund <
> magnus.westerlund=[e-mail]> wrote:
> > Hi,
> > 
> > Due to the reshuffeling it may be hard to see exactly what is changing. So
> > to
> > clarify in text what is being changed. 
> > 
> > The big change is to allow work on three "extension": Version Negotiation,
> > datagram (these two are listed under fourth focus area) and how to better
> > support load balancers (fifth focus area). 
> > 
> > Otherwise the changes are:
> > - removal of the initial input drafts to base the work on in first
> > paragraph.
> > - Reshuffling of the paragraphs, the one "current practices for network
> > management ..." is moved down. 
> > - Removal of pragaraph regarding interim during first year. 
> > - Removal of stand alone paragraph preventing extension work. The no other
> > extensions is now baked into paragraph on fourth focus area. 
> > - Clarification that mapping work may also be done outside of QUIC WG. 
> > 
> > Cheers
> > 
> > Magnus Westerlund
> > 
> > On Mon, 2020-01-27 at 12:22 +0000, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
> > > WG,
> > > 
> > > Below you will find the draft charter text proposed by ADs and WG chairs.
> > I
> > > intended to have the IESG agree to send this out for External Review at
> > the
> > > next
> > > IESG meeting (2020-02-06). So if you have any comments and proposal for
> > > changes
> > > now is a good time. 
> > > 
> > > Below is a copy of the current draft in the datatracker:
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-quic/
> > > 
> > > Diff: 
> > > 
> > 
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fcharter-ietf-quic%2Fwithmilestones-01.txt&url2=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fcharter-ietf-quic%2Fwithmilestones-01-00.txt
> > > 
> > > QUIC WG Draft Charter (01-00)
> > > 
> > > The QUIC working group will provide standards-track specifications for a
> > > UDP-
> > > based, stream-multiplexing, encrypted transport protocol, based on
> > > pre-
> > > standardization implementation and deployment experience.
> > > 
> > > Key goals for QUIC are:
> > > 
> > > - Minimizing connection establishment and overall transport latency for
> > > applications, starting with HTTP/2; - Providing multiplexing without
> > > head-of-line blocking; - Requiring only changes to path endpoints to
> > enable
> > > deployment; - Enabling multipath and forward error correction extensions;
> > and
> > > -
> > > Providing always-secure transport, using TLS 1.3 by default.
> > > 
> > > The work of the group will have five main focus areas, corresponding to
> > five
> > > core deliverables.
> > > 
> > > The first of these is the core transport work, which will describe the
> > wire
> > > format, along with the mechanisms for connection establishment, stream
> > > multiplexing, data reliability, loss detection and recovery, congestion
> > > control, and options negotiation. Work on congestion control will describe
> > use
> > > of a standardized congestion controller as a default scheme for QUIC.
> > Defining
> > > new congestion control schemes is explicitly out of scope for this group.
> > QUIC
> > > is expected to support rapid, distributed development and testing of
> > features.
> > > 
> > > The second of these focus areas is security. This work will describe how
> > the
> > > protocol uses TLS 1.3 for key negotiation and will also describe how those
> > > keys
> > > are used to provide confidentiality and integrity protection of both
> > > application data and QUIC headers. This work will ensure that QUIC has
> > > security
> > > and privacy properties that are at least as good as a stack composed of
> > TLS
> > > 1.3
> > > using TCP (or MPTCP when using multipath).
> > > 
> > > The third focus area will describe mappings between specific application
> > > protocols and the transport facilities of QUIC. The first mapping will be
> > a
> > > description of HTTP/2 semantics using QUIC, specifically with the goal of
> > > minimizing web latency using QUIC. This mapping will accommodate the
> > extension
> > > mechanisms defined in the HTTP/2 specification. Upon completion of that
> > > mapping, additional protocols may be added by updating this charter to
> > include
> > > them, or working elsewhere.
> > > 
> > > The fourth focus area will be on extensions to core protocol facilities,
> > to
> > > enable datagram delivery, version negotiation, and multipath
> > capabilities..
> > > Other extensions are out of the scope of this charter.
> > > 
> > > The fifth focus area will provide an Applicability and Manageability
> > > Statement,
> > > describing how, and under what circumstances, QUIC may be safely used, and
> > > describing deployment and manageability implications of the protocol.
> > > Additionally, the Working Group will delivery a mechanism to assist load
> > > balancers in their handling of QUIC.
> 
>  
> delivery -> deliver 
> > > 
> > > Current practices for network management of transport protocols include
> > the
> > > ability to apply access control lists (ACLs), hashing of flows for equal-
> > cost
> > > multipath routing (ECMP), directional signaling of flows, signaling of
> > flow
> > > setup and teardown, and the ability to export information about flows for
> > > accounting purposes. The QUIC protocol need not be defined to enable each
> > of
> > > these abilities, or enable them in the same way as they are enabled by TCP
> > > when
> > > used with TLS 1.3, but the working group must consider the impact of the
> > > protocol on network management practices, reflecting the tensions
> > described in
> > > RFC 7258.
> > > 
> > > Note that consensus is required both for changes to the current protocol
> > > mechanisms and retention of current mechanisms. In particular, because
> > > something is in the initial document set does not imply that there is
> > > consensus
> > > around the feature or around how it is specified.
> 
>  
> I think the above paragraph should now be removed.
>  
> > > 
> > > The QUIC working group will work closely with the HTTPbis working group,
> > > especially on the QUIC mapping for HTTP/2.
> > > 
-- 
Cheers

Magnus Westerlund 


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