Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9312 (7996)

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From: Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9312 (7996)
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This errata is correct. Thanks to whoever reported it!


On 20.06.24, 13:53, "RFC Errata System" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> wrote:


The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9312,
"Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol".


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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7996 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7996>


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Type: Editorial
Reported by: No No <no@no.no <mailto:no@no.no>>


Section: 2.1 + 8


Original Text
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Operators should expect to observe packets with other version numbers
as a result of various Internet experiments, future standards, and
greasing [RFC7801].


...


[RFC7801]
Dolmatov, V., Ed., "GOST R 34.12-2015: Block Cipher "Kuznyechik"",
RFC 7801, DOI 10.17487/RFC7801, March 2016,
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7801> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7801;>


Corrected Text
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Operators should expect to observe packets with other version numbers
as a result of various Internet experiments, future standards, and
greasing [RFC8701].


...


[RFC 8701]
Benjamin, D.,"Applying Generate Random Extensions And Sustain
Extensibility (GREASE) to TLS Extensibility", RFC 8701,
DOI 10.17487/RFC8701, January 2020,
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8701> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8701;>.


Notes
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Typo, should be RFC8701 instead of RFC7801


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RFC9312 (draft-ietf-quic-manageability-18)
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Title : Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
Publication Date : September 2022
Author(s) : M. Kühlewind, B. Trammell
Category : INFORMATIONAL
Source : QUIC
Stream : IETF
Verifying Party : IESG