Re: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-quic-recovery-33: (with COMMENT)

Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com> Wed, 06 January 2021 04:18 UTC

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From: Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 06 Jan 2021 04:17:54 +0000
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Subject: Re: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-quic-recovery-33: (with COMMENT)
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Hi Roman,

Thanks for the review. I've captured your comments as issues on the QUIC WG
GItHub repository. Links to each are provided as in-line responses.

On Tue, Jan 5, 2021 at 10:36 PM Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-quic-recovery-33: No Objection
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> Thanks to Derrell Piper for the SECDIR review.
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> ** Section 3.  Per “The encryption level indicates the packet number
> space, as
> described in [QUIC-TRANSPORT ]”, I think that reference here is Section 4.*
> from [QUIC-TLS] as I can’t find a mapping between PNS and encryption
> levels as
> discussed here in [QUIC-TRANSPORT].
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https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4555

Cheers,
Lucas
On behalf of QUIC WG Chairs