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Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Tue, 07 December 2021 04:55 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com>, Tommy Pauly <tpauly=40apple.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06
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From: Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com>
Sent: Monday, December 6, 2021 8:04 PM
To: Tommy Pauly
Cc: Zaheduzzaman Sarker; draft-ietf-quic-datagram.authors@ietf.org; IETF QUIC WG
Subject: Re: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06

Thanks for the review Zahed

On Mon, Dec 6, 2021 at 6:17 PM Tommy Pauly <tpauly=40apple.com@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:40apple.com@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote:
Hi Zahed,

Thanks for the review!

On Dec 6, 2021, at 5:53 AM, Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com<mailto:zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>> wrote:

Hi,

Thanks for well written and short document.

This document have following text in the abstract and introduction –

“Discussion of this work is encouraged to happen on the QUIC IETF mailing list quic@ietf.org<mailto:quic@ietf.org> or on the GitHub repository which contains the draft: https://github.com/quicwg/datagram<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=31323334-501d5122-fe22d327-454445555731-d8c57b11f2359f3e&q=1&e=0-f9b6d5030a51aeefed5614fa71de1ba1&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fdatagram>.”

I don’t think we need to have them at this stage of this document. Please remove them.

Looking at RFC9000, this was around even in the last version prior to RFC publication (draft-ietf-quic-transport-34). I don’t think it’s beneficial to remove this now.

+1, As a compromise, perhaps add an RFC editor note to remove the note before publication?

Yes, that would work.

Thanks

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