WGLC for QUIC Transport-30

Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Wed, 23 September 2020 16:01 UTC

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From: Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
Subject: WGLC for QUIC Transport-30
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I reviewed draft-ietf-quic-transport-30 again as a part of the WGLC.

I can confirm this is much improved in clarity on protocol issues, thanks.

I still have some comments on the text, not the protocol, see:
#4143,
#4144,
#4145
#4146,
and on the reference format in #4147.

Best wishes,

Gorry