New revisions submitted of Applicability and Manageability Statements

[Mirja Kuehlewind <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,



as you may have seen we submitted new revisions of both the Applicability and the Manageability Statement on Monday. For these reversions we merged in a whole bunch of PRs we received or created based on feedback from wglc. There are still a bunch of issues and PRs open on github and I will send a separate mail on those. We plan to discuss and resolve those before or during the meeting and then submit another revision hopefully soon after the meeting.



The large part of the merged PRs were either purely editorial or fixed something obviously unclear or outdated. Find the full list below of those PRs (in case you really want to know). There were only three PRs for each document where we really added new text. These additions already received reviews from multiple people and were entirely uncontroversial or also mostly clarifications. I would say the only real new text is the new section on ICMP and that guidance should also be straight-forward. The list of those PRs is here:



Applicability Statement:



Add a sentence on taps<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/259> #259 to address part of #203<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/203>



Ordered and reliable will be assumed<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/228> #228 fixes #215<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/215>



Stream ID interactions<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/270> #270 fixes #263<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/263>



Manageability Statement:



Update MTU to Min QUIC packet size in manageability<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/262> #262 fixes #177<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/177>



New section on ICMP<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/249> #249 fixes #200<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/200>



Make it clear that the spin bit generates samples<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/226> #226 fixes #180<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/180>





Let us know if you have any further comments on these or fill an issue in github!



Thanks to everybody how reviewed these documents in wgcl and provided feedback/PRs!



Mirja and Brian





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List of editorial changes/clarifications:



(Note some PRs modified normative language but this is only because we previously already agreed to remove all normative language and missed these cases; the content or recommendation is not supposed to be changed)



Simplify<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/275> #275 fixes #218<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/218>



Editorial notes from applicability read-through<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/268> #268



Move "Distinguishing Acknowledgment traffic" into sec 3<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/267> #267



Tighten up language around 0-RTT<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/261> #261 fixes #227<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/227>



Add reference to quit-transport sec 6 on version negotiation<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/260> #260 fixes #199<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/199>



might eventually be able to associate the version...<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/255> #255 fixes #239<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/239>



Version negotiation<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/254> #254 fixes #238<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/238>



Integrity check and on-path modifications<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/253> #253 fixes #236<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/236>



clarify 10 0-RTT packets in first round<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/252> #252 fixes #235<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/235>



Update version info<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/251> #251 fixes #231<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/231>



Fix section reference to QUIC-http ALPN<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/250> #250 fixes #217<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/217>



Add section references on how padding is used in QUIC<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/248> #248 fixes #194<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/194>



Edits on TLS vs TLS1.3<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/247> #247 fixes #174<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/174>



editorial edits on modifications and proxies in intro<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/246> #246 fixes #230<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/230>



Less encrypted; more correct about HTTP<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/229> #229



Editorial rollup for applicability<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/225> #225 fixes #205<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/205>, #186<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/186>, #187<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/187>, #216<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/216>



Editorial comments from @seanturner, thanks!<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/224> #224 fixes #189<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/189>, #190<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/190>, #191<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/191>



Editorial nits from @gorryfair, thanks!<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/223>  #223 fixes #185<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/185>



Clarify and reference spinbit optional/version<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/221> #221 fixes #179<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/179>



clarify that ports are advisory for the network<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/220> #220 fixes #176<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/176>



reword "interference by firewalls"<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/213> #213 fixes #196<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/196>



remove normative language from port usage sentence<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/211> #211 fixes #195<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/195>



RECOMMENDED on TCP-without-TLS abort<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/209> #209 fixes #192<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/192>



Cite RFC4748 correctly<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/208> #208



remove NOT RECOMMENDED in ACK section<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/207> #207 fixes #182<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/182>