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Re: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06

Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com> Mon, 06 December 2021 18:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-datagram-06
Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2021 10:08:24 -0800
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Hi Zahed,

Thanks for the review!

> On Dec 6, 2021, at 5:53 AM, Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi, 
>  
> Thanks for well written and short document.
>  
> This document have following text in the abstract and introduction –
>  
> “Discussion of this work is encouraged to happen on the QUIC IETF mailing list quic@ietf.org <mailto:quic@ietf.org> or on the GitHub repository which contains the draft: https://github.com/quicwg/datagram <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram>.”
>  
> I don’t think we need to have them at this stage of this document. Please remove them.

Looking at RFC9000, this was around even in the last version prior to RFC publication (draft-ietf-quic-transport-34). I don’t think it’s beneficial to remove this now.

>  
> I have filed number of issues/clarification requests. I would like them to be addressed before moving forward. Please find them below.
>  
> https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/65#issue-1072093788 <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/65#issue-1072093788>
I’ve opened: https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/69 <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/69>
> https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/66#issue-1072096156 <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/66#issue-1072096156>
I’ve opened: https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/70 <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/pull/70>

> https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/67#issue-1072166520 <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/67#issue-1072166520>
> https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/68#issue-1072177360 <https://github.com/quicwg/datagram/issues/68#issue-1072177360>
These two I’ve commented on. I don’t think either are appropriate to address specifically in this document. Rather, discussions about how media applications can be optimized seems like a larger future exercise beyond the definition of this frame type.

If people have specific suggestions of text, I’d be happy to see that, though.

Best,
Tommy
>  
> BR
>  
>  
> Zahed

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