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Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Tue, 21 March 2017 07:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: Core drafts -02 out
To: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>, IETF QUIC WG <quic@ietf.org>
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From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
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On 2017-03-14 00:57, Martin Thomson wrote:
> The editors have submitted -02 versions of the base set of QUIC drafts.
>
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-transport-02
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-tls-02
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-recovery-02
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-http-02
> ...


Here's a nit: the drafts currently cite their sibling drafts in a way 
that doesn't conform to the applicable rules. For instance, in 
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-http-02#section-10.1> we have:

>    [QUIC-TRANSPORT]
>               Iyengar, J., Ed. and M. Thomson, Ed., "QUIC: A UDP-Based
>               Multiplexed and Secure Transport".

That lacks the draft name, the publication date, and the mandatory "work 
in progress" clause.

Essentially, a newbie reader would have to do a web search for the 
document title.

Best regards, Julian

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